Hey, I thought this was a really cool article. It's an interesting design and felt like a really fun project. My only suggestion is to move the “Things You'll Need” section up top more before the actual steps. It will help the reader follow better. Other than that all your links worked and were very helpful. Overall, your wiki is very well put together and professional. You did a great job!!
(Sorry I Didn’t read the 100 words part) Also, I looked at the links you put up and I found the one on “healthy nails” to be really interesting. Perhaps you might want to include more of the information in that article in your how-to. Such as, the first step being to evaluate the condition of your nails. It would add more facts to your article as well as get useful information out there.
I thought your article was humorous and I enjoyed reading it! It is a cool nail design, especially for those who do not appreciate Valentines day and are against "lovey dovey" things. Your steps were well written with great detail. The format of your page makes all the steps easy to follow. I also thought it was a good idea for you to list other options and color combinations for the nail art. It would have been cool if you provided more pictures of your nail design done in different colors. Overall I think you did a very awesome job!
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ReplyDeleteI thought this was a really cool article. It's an interesting design and felt like a really fun project. My only suggestion is to move the “Things You'll Need” section up top more before the actual steps. It will help the reader follow better. Other than that all your links worked and were very helpful. Overall, your wiki is very well put together and professional. You did a great job!!
(Sorry I Didn’t read the 100 words part) Also, I looked at the links you put up and I found the one on “healthy nails” to be really interesting. Perhaps you might want to include more of the information in that article in your how-to. Such as, the first step being to evaluate the condition of your nails. It would add more facts to your article as well as get useful information out there.
DeleteI thought your article was humorous and I enjoyed reading it! It is a cool nail design, especially for those who do not appreciate Valentines day and are against "lovey dovey" things. Your steps were well written with great detail. The format of your page makes all the steps easy to follow. I also thought it was a good idea for you to list other options and color combinations for the nail art. It would have been cool if you provided more pictures of your nail design done in different colors. Overall I think you did a very awesome job!
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