Wiki Project Comments

Katherine Guenther's Blog Url: http://cyberrebel9.blogspot.com 
I thought you did a great job on your Buffalo Wiki page. I liked how it was really informative, and you seemed to have covered every aspect of the park. The pictures that you included gave me a good visual of the park. It makes me want to go there, even though I have never hiked a day in my life! I also enjoyed reading and learning about the back history, such as the massacre and the paranormal activity. Although, I would have liked to see more information on that though. Maybe if you added in another ghost story or something to that affect. All in all, I think you did a great job with your wiki page. I enjoyed it!
Wiki Link: http://buffalo.wikispot.org/Devil%27s_Hole_State_Park

Shane Canning's Blog Url: http://shanecanning17974.blogspot.com
I thought that your article was very informative and I enjoyed reading it. I thought that the steps that you mentioned were very useful and informative. You also added a bit of humor in the first step, which was nice as well. The steps were also simple to follow. To some people, planning a trip is just too much for them, but I think that you made it seem less of a challenge and achievable for people who do want to travel. All in all, you did a good job with your WikiHow. I liked the article and it's a great article for people who want to travel, or are thinking of travelling.
Wiki Link:http://www.wikihow.com/Do-a-United-States-Road-Trip-on-a-Budget

MaryLou Badawy's Blog Url: http://maryloub925.blogspot.com
I enjoyed your article a lot, it made me hungry! I'm always up to trying new foods and this recipe looks good and simple to make. I really liked the pictures that you included in your article. It gave a great visual for me on how it should look and be prepared. I also thought that your instructions were well written and easy to follow. I wasn't confused at all when reading the steps, so that was a plus for me.
My only concern about the article was when you talked about the ingredients in the optional section (pomegranate molasses, powdered sumac, and pita bread). I would have liked a section as to where you can find these products in stores. Personally, I've never heard of the molasses and sumac so I just didn't know if they were sold at a certain store or in a regular grocery store.
Other than that, I really enjoyed your article!
Wiki Link: http://www.wikihow.com/Make-Traditional-Lebanese-Fattoush

Elenni Davis Knight's Blog Url: http://edk12.blogspot.com
I thought that this was an interesting topic to cover. Misogyny in hip hop is a big topic, and I think it's awesome that you shared the information because it's becoming a huge problem in the hip hop scene. It's nice to know that there are organizations who are trying to raise awareness about the problems. I didn't know about this group until I read your article, so I learned something new today. I think the article was very informative and well done. You shared a lot of information about this group. The one suggestion that I have is that it would have been nice to mention some other groups out there similar to the Black Girls Rock group. Other than that, I think you did a great job on your Wiki page!
Wiki Link: Beating The Beats: The Black Girls Rock! Foundation

China Stephen's Blog Url: http://chairenea.blogspot.com
I thought that your article was well written, and it had some good tips and advice about how to convince your significant other to participate in Valentines Day. I liked the introduction a lot with the description of the boyfriend playing Call of Duty. I thought that made a lot of people in relationships relate to that type of situation. The humor caught my attention to the rest of the article. My only problem with the article was with the first step, but that's just my personal opinion. I wouldn't dote on my significant other just to celebrate V-day. He can get his own food (haha!). I also liked your closing remark. It summed up the article, and talked about not getting wrapped up in the day. The link from the APA was also very interesting. I liked how that was added in as well. Overall, I liked your article and good job!
Wiki Link: http://www.wikihow.com/User:Stephecr01